IELTS Writing Practice
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Content
The essay describes the main changes but could provide more detailed comparisons between old and new layouts.
Structure
Paragraphing is present but could be clearer with more distinct sections for each area of the map.
Language
Good use of linking words like 'Overall' and 'namely' enhances cohesion.
Grammar
Watch for small grammar errors and improve the use of plural/singular forms.
Structure Guide
How to structure your essay for a Band 9 score
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, a solid structure is key. A great argument essay structure typically consists of four paragraphs with specific sentence counts.
1Introduction
- Background statement
- Detailed background
- Thesis
- Outline sentence
2Supporting Paragraphs
- Topic sentence
- Example
- Discussion
- Conclusion
Overall Band Score
0.0
197words
3paragraphs
minimum 250 words required
197
Word count
aim for 7+
4
Linking words used
minimize errors
1
Grammar errors
reduce repetition
1
Repetitive words/phrases
Coherence & Cohesion
7.0Logical structure
Clear paragraphing
Accurate linking words
Cohesive devices
Lexical Resource
7.0Varied vocabulary
Appropriate word choice
Spelling accuracy
Collocation
Grammatical Range
7.0Sentence variety
Complex structures
Clear and correct grammar
Punctuation
Task Achievement
7.0Complete response
Clear position
Supporting ideas
Development of ideas